雅思大作文举例范文第1篇
1 五大题型模板
开头段：
(opinion) The discussion about _____ is a very controversial one. Those who criticize (/oppose/object to/are against) _____ contend (/argue/hold) that _____, but people who advocate (/favor/are for) _____, on the other hand, maintain (/assert/ claim) that _____. From the personal perspective, I maintain (/hold/believe) that _____.
(agree/disagree) When it refers to _____, the discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vogue during the last decade. It is commonly accepted that _____; however, I disagree with the statement. I maintain (/hold/believe) that _____. (I partly approve this claim and there are several reasons and instance as follows supporting my view.)(advantages/disadvantages) Just a few years ago, the idea of _____ seemed far-reaching for most Chinese. Now, however, we are all aware that everything has two sides. _____ is no exception in its development. With the advert and popularity of _____, its advantages and disadvantages have been a subject of discussion.
(discuss both views) _____ now plays such an important role in so many people’s lives that it is essential for us to try to decide whether it is a blessing or a curse. People’s opinions are divergent on such a complex and controversial topic. Advocates maintain that _____. Opponents, on the other hand, contend (argue/insist) that _____. Obviously, both sides have over-simplified this issue. Actually, its value to people and society depends on how it is used.
(problems&solutions) According to a(n) survey (/investigation/analysis/statistics/report) released (/conducted/made) by _____, there is a growing (/increasing/declining) number of _____ who (/which) _____.
To be specific, ______. (What amazes us most is that _____.) Among countless factors which directly and indirectly influence _____, there are several conspicuous aspects as follows.
正文段：
(opinion) (agree/disagree) The main reason for my propensity to _____ is that _____. What is more, _____. Moving on to wider themes, I agree with the statement that _____ without reservations for the reason that _____. Naturally, _____. It can be given a concrete example that _____.
Another equally essential factor why I advocate _____ involves the realm of _____. No one can deny that _____. Obviously, it is imperative that _____. Meanwhile, a recent survey (/a typical example) will make this point clear and acceptable; _____.
However, we should concede that dispite the merits of _____ mentioned above, overextented _____ will be indeed counterproductive, even harmful. The harm it produces is, in my opinion, both palpable and profound. For individuals, it has a debasing impact on _____; for society, it may promote a negative tendency toward _____.
(advantages/disadvantages) (discuss both views) On one hand,
1. _____ has brought a number of (/ a lot of) benefits to us (/people).
2. _____ benefits us in many respects.
3.The benefits of _____ can be perceived in many aspects.
4.We get a lot of benefits from _____.
5. _____ has brought about many changes in people’s life.
6. _____ is a beneficial activity, in which we can obtain many advantages. First and foremost, _____. What is more, _____. In the end, _____.
On the other hand,
1.Just as a coin has tow sides, _____ also has some bad effects (/ill effects/side effects).
2._____, on the other hand, have its disadvantages (/negative points/problems).
3. However, _____ has also brought about (/given rise to/led to/resulted in/caused/created) a lot of problems.
4.Good (/Superior/Wonderful) as A is, _____, it has its own disadvantages (/brings its own problems), too.
For one thing, _____. For another, _____, Finally, _____.
(problems&solutions)
The reasons (/causes/factors) for _____ are complex (/varied/profound). Some attribute it to _____. Others put it down to _____. Still others owe it to _____. In my opinion, however, three (/some) factors shout louder than others (/weigh heavier than others/stand out from others). The most critical
reason lies in _____. Moreover, _____. Another important factor should not be ignored. _____.
Among a myriad of suggested solutions to _____ (/measures against _____ /plans for _____ /moves toward _____ /ideas on _____), three have begun to stand (/stick) out. First of all, _____. An equally effective measure (/solution/recipe) is _____. Last but not least, _____.
结论：
(opinion) (agree/disagree) Weighing the pros and cons of _____, I strongly commit to the notion that _____, not only because _____, but also because _____.
(advantages/disadvantages) To sum up,the key point is how to make good use of its positive aspects and avoid its negative points. While taking advantage of _____, we must try to find ways to reduce its disadvantages, namely, _____, to a minimum.
雅思大作文举例范文第2篇
As for the reasons, there are three main ones that must be mentioned. Firstly, the continuous growth of automobiles provides sufficient condition to cause traffic jam. Due to the industrial development, autos are increasingly affordable and thus become increasingly popular in urban residents. Moreover, despite some certain cases, the majority of the car owners travel to work, as well as leave for home, in almost the same time. Hence, with the help of an inherited nature of urban area, the dense population, the volum of traffic may understandably reach a peak during these hours. Last, the urban planning, especially for traffic, can rarellly be abreast with the pace of autos growing. When put these factors together, a conclusion can be conduct that rush hour is not an accident but a certain.
Obviously, rush hour brings a serious of defect. One of the troublesome consequences is waste of time. Because of lower speed and longer congestion, people who are unfortunately involved may cost more on way to work and easier to be late so that likely to have their mood mess. In other side, heavy traffic flow may lead to severe air pollution and inefficient use of fossil fuel which fall into category of social problem. In one word, rush hour delivers a negative effect on not only individuals in their daily life, but the society as a whole.
雅思大作文举例范文第3篇
雅思的大作文是一篇议论文，其主要的类型分为两类：询问观点以及分析问题的原因，后果，和解决方法。根据历年的雅思考试来看，第一种询问观点的题目明显占据着主导地位，而第二种类型的题目则偶尔会出现一次。那么关于第一种类型的雅思作文的结构，不同的老师都有自己独到的见解。
但是，纵观各种雅思的结构以及模板，大多大同小异，没有什么特别大的区别。而很多学生在听完结构的讲解后，依然反映说自己一头雾水，在实际真正的应用和操作中并没有办法很好的将这种结构体现出来。究其原因，主要是大多数学生自身水平有限，没有办法正确理解老师在结构讲解中提到的内容。所以，朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家将在本文中更为详尽的解读一下雅思大作文针对观点类题目的结构。雅思大作文写作可分为四段：开头段，主体段两段，以及结尾段。
很多考生在开头段这个部分都会选择套用一种固定的模板。朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家建议各位烤鸭们不要完全依赖于模板，主要出于这么几个原因：1. 现在网络上流传着各种各样的模板，而这些模板已经被全国无数的雅思考生下载。所以，如果考生依赖于这个模板的话，恐怕会给考官造成一种千篇一律的感觉，从而拉低自己的分数。2. 很多考生在开头都会习惯性的用一些固定的套句，比如说with the development of economy, as the society develops等等，但问题是并不是每个题目都适合。比如说，题目问在孩子的教育上，老师还是家长应该担当起更多的责任?如果考生上来写随着经济发展这样的话，恐怕考官看后会感觉非常的莫名其妙。所以，朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家们建议各位考生采取一个比较个性化的开头。
在学习如何写一个个性化的开头时，考生必须要先明确议论文作文开头的目的：
1. 对话题提供一个基本的背景介绍：很多时候雅思议论文的话题其实并不被大家所了
解。比如说，之前雅思考题曾经问到Should criminals be sent to prison or receive education and training? 完全从读者的角度去考虑这个问题的话，很多人其实并不清楚，了解这个话题。所以，考生需要将所涉及的议论文话题的背景介绍提供给读者(考官)，让读者搞清楚整个话题的基本情况，主流的观点都有哪些等等，这为后面去看考生的文章做了一个好的铺垫。
2. 强调考题探讨的意义，从而引起读者的兴趣：其实，很多时候，作为议论性文章的读者，他们最关心的是议论文的话题是否能够引起他们足够的兴趣。如果读者对题目首先就不感兴趣，那么就很难继续深入的阅读文章。所以，考生在开头段的写作中，需要先足够强调这个题目的探讨价值和意义，让读者了解到这个题目是很值得讨论的。其次，考生在写作中应该多列举一些社会中的真实场景和现象，数据，事实，从而能够拉近考生与这个话题之间的距离，让读者能够继续阅读下去。
为了达到上述所讲到的几个目的，朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家们提出了下列的开头段的结构：
1. 话题的背景介绍：
根据刚才的分析，这个部分的内容应该是开头段的重中之重。那么如何介绍这个话题的背景呢?主要有三个部分：
过去：首先，雅思考生可以从历史入手，简单扼要的介绍一下今天所涉及的这个话题一
开始的起因或者是缘由。基本上，这个部分只需要两三句话即可，让读者对这个话题的历史背景有所了解。一般来说，在历史这个部分的描述中，考生不能上来就直接针对雅思的这个题目来展开进行背景介绍等等的内容，这样会略显突兀。通常朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家会建议考生在看到题目后先确定其所属的话题范围，比如说今天的题目是：环境问题现在变得越来越严重，应该是政府负责还是个人来负责解决?如果考生在背景介绍中讲到在过去，环境问题是由政府来解决的，那就会感觉比较奇怪。所以，这里建议考生们在过去描述的部分不要直奔主题，先抓住大的话题。针对这个话题的话，我们可以先把握住其大话题是讲环境的。所以，在过去的描述中，可以将重点放在描述过去的环境非常好，空气清新，树木茂盛，等等。
现状：既然讲了这个话题的历史背景，那么下一个部分自然而然就引到现状。在现状的
描述中，建议考生多用一些现实生活中的现象，例子，事实，甚至是数据对这个话题的现在的状况进行一定的充实。比如说，就这个题目而言，可以说现在的环境已经变的非常恶劣：沙漠化，水资源短缺，全球变暖，异常气候更频繁等等。
变化的原因：前面讲到了这个话题的历史和现状，这其中便突显出了差别和变化。那么
这种变化(环境的恶化)的原因便可以放在这两个部分之间起到一个过渡作用。比如说，环境由好向坏的转变可以归结到工业的迅速发展，对自然资源的抢夺，以及污染的排放。
连接句：到现在为止，关于这个大话题的背景已经介绍的非常清楚了。但是，这还没有
完全的引入到具体的题目问题当中。所以，这里考生需要想出一两句话，能够将这个大话题自然而然的过渡到今天的题目当中。比如说，环境问题已经成为迫切需要解决的问题了，所以为了解决这个问题，有很多方面的讨论。有的人认为应该政府来做，而有的人认为应该个人来做。
2. 观点
在背景现象摆出来之后，考生应该把自己的观点摆出来。基本上来说，就是在开头段的最后一句话，摆明自己的立场。这样就构成了一个完整的议论文开头。
雅思大作文举例范文第4篇
1.与垃圾处理有关
2.与照看老人有关
3.与精神压力有关
4.与用动物做实验有关
5.与各媒体互相比较有关
6.与一次性包装袋有关
7.与政府应该多投资于建设还是多投资于国防有关
8.与政府应该多支持理科学生还是应该多支持其他学科学生有关
9.与城市变大好不好有关
10.与评价一个国家是看经济还是看生活水平有关
11.与孩子看电视和玩电脑有关
12.与机器人有关
13.与政府是否应负责普及电脑有关
14.与多媒体发展后书是否会被淘汰有关
15.与职业运动员是否应该有较高收入有关
16.与政府是否应该限制创新艺术家有关
17.与出国找工作有哪些优缺点有关
18.与出国学习有哪些优缺点有关
19.与学生行为问题有关
20.与体育的竞争性和合作性有关
21.与妇女犯罪率升高有关
22.与年轻人地位高权力大有关
23.与搞好城市规划让市民满意有关
24.与计算机翻译和学外语的关系有关
25.与英语及旅游对当地文化的负面影响有关
26.与资助穷国的钱可能会被滥用有关
27.与21世纪保护野生动物浪费太大有关
28.与该不该杀动物吃肉或做实验有关
29.与汽车的利弊有关
30.与尊守外国风俗习惯有关
31.与怎样才能减少城乡差别有关
32.与高中毕业前应不应该实践一下有关
33.与干长期固定工作好还是经常换工作好有关
34.与建立博物馆的目的有关
35.与学校的理论课和实践课有关
36.与论述阅读报刊比看电视听广播更好有关
37.与论述看电视听广播比阅读报刊更好有关
38.与是否应该完全禁止抽烟有关
39.与什么地方可以抽烟什么地方不能抽烟有关
40.与学校在每门课程上是否应该接收相同数量的男女学生有关
41.与55岁以上高级职称人员让位于年轻人有关
42.与计算机能否代替老师有关
43.与人的性格是先天的还是后天的有关
44.与孩子犯罪和家长的责任有关
45.与博士硕士学位的学生毕业后收入多上学时应该多付一些费用有关
46.与学校的体育课是否应让位于知识课有关
47.与国外旅游是增加相互文化了解还是形成紧张有关
48.与大学教育是否应满足学生毕业后的职业要求有关
49.与保护野生动物的钱是否应花在人类身上有关
50.与国与国间的电视娱乐节目容易交流能否消除国际间的文化差别有关
51.与女性是否可以当兵打仗有关
52.与计算机是否会影响学生的身心健康有关
53.与尖子是否应当单独培养，程度不同的学生要不要分班学习有关
54.与互联网如此发达后，学校教育是否还有必要有关
雅思大作文举例范文第5篇
在雅思大作文开头段结束之后，我们现在就进入到了主体段的结构当中。首先，关于段落分配的问题，也有很多老师建议五段式的写法。与四段式的写法相比而言，五段式写法的唯一区别就是它将支持正方的两个分论点分开了，分成了两个自然段。朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家认为这并不会对考生的作文有什么影响。但是，对于水平较低，在写雅思作文过程中经常遇到没有什么思路的情况的学生来说，建议仍然使用四段式。因为很多考生在构思某个雅思话题的时候，并不是非常容易的找到支持自己观点的两个分论点。很有可能导致的最终情况就是一个观点想到了很多内容，而第二个支持的分论点则很难想出来。在写作文的时候，可能会一个分论点写作100多个单词，而另一个分论点就两三句话，看起来非常不对称。所以我们还是按照四段式的方法来进行雅思作文的写作。
雅思作文当中的第一个主体段需要支持自己的总观点。在这个段落里，考生总共需要想出两个分论点从而写出一百多字的文章。按照一般学生的英语表现水平，这个段落总共需要十句话。那么基本上来说就是一句话十到十二个单词左右。按照两个分论点平均分配的原则(这个并不一定，要视题目而定。如果第一个分论点比较大的话，考生可以适当缩小第二个分论点的内容)，平均每个分论点需要五句话。基本上来说，第一句话都需要将分论点做一个概括，然后后面四句话提供支持和展开。
根据往年的教学经验来看，这四句话就是困扰烤鸭们的最大的一个难点。很多学生总是觉得无话可说，从而导致文章写不完或者字数不够。究其原因，考生的最大问题是并不清楚这四句话的目的和作用是什么。其实，这四句话的证明无非就是起到以下列出的两个作用：
1. 证明分论点的正确性：很多考生在主体段的写作时，通常抱有一种错误的态度，那就是自己认为自己的分论点是正确的，没有什么争议的。但事实上，自己的分论点往往是值得推敲的。所以，考生在后四句话展开的首要任务就是证明自己的分论点是正确的。比如说题目是问车有哪些好处?很多考生看到这个题目的第一反应就是车很方便。大多数人对车能带
来方便这个观点所持有的态度是take for granted. 但真的是如此吗?现在停车位已经越来越难找;交通事故越来越多;交通堵塞已经变成了家常便饭。所以，车并不见得能给人带来方便。那么，在这个部分，就需要考生进行一定的支持和论证。
2. 举例说明和论证。议论文的论证需要有例子来进行支撑。很多学生都喜欢用例子来充实自己的主体段。但事实证明，考生们并不清楚使用例子的目的和作用。其实，议论文当中穿插例子是用来证明分论点的准确性和说服力的。很多考生在写作时是为了举例而举例，很多例子跟这个分论点毫无关系，甚至说是相违背的。如果是这样的话，那就起不到支撑的作用了。所以，例子必须要为分论点而服务。还有很多考生会犯的错误就是喜欢枚举很多例子。其实，这样做反而适得其反。考生的思维是说的越多越好;而雅思考官的想法则是要么就别说，要说就说的详细，仔细，具体。所以，这里朗阁海外考试研究中心建议考生每个分论点只举一个例子，但是要说详细。
下面我们就进入到了第二个主体段。这个段落的主要意图是要考虑反方的观点。可能很多考生会纳闷，为什么要考虑反方观点?其实道理很简单。考生在议论文的论证中最重要的就是要体现出思想的成熟度。换句话说，就是要从多个不同的角度考虑问题。如果考生的论证只是从一方面出发，那就说明考生的思维很片面，并不能完整的考虑一个argument. 所以考生在这个段落中引出反方的分论点以及反方的论证。整个段落大约只需70-80个单词左右。
最后是结尾段。一般来说，考生到了这个部分，已经将要临近尾声了。即便是这个部分有再多的内容要写，恐怕时间也已经不允许了。所以，朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家们提出了以下构成结尾段的两个部分：1. 总观点概括，做到前后呼应。2. 展望未来。在最后一个部分，只要考生就这个话题在未来的发展情况作出一个预测，或者是展望都可以。结尾控制在30-40个单词即可。
雅思大作文举例范文第6篇
1 五大题型模板
开头段：
(opinion) The discussion about _____ is a very controversial one. Those who criticize (/oppose/object to/are against) _____ contend (/argue/hold) that _____, but people who advocate (/favor/are for) _____, on the other hand, maintain (/assert/ claim) that _____. From the personal perspective, I maintain (/hold/believe) that _____.
(agree/disagree) When it refers to _____, the discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vogue during the last decade. It is commonly accepted that _____; however, I disagree with the statement. I maintain (/hold/believe) that _____. (I partly approve this claim and there are several reasons and instance as follows supporting my view.)(advantages/disadvantages) Just a few years ago, the idea of _____ seemed far-reaching for most Chinese. Now, however, we are all aware that everything has two sides. _____ is no exception in its development. With the advert and popularity of _____, its advantages and disadvantages have been a subject of discussion.
(discuss both views) _____ now plays such an important role in so many people’s lives that it is essential for us to try to decide whether it is a blessing or a curse. People’s opinions are divergent on such a complex and controversial topic. Advocates maintain that _____. Opponents, on the other hand, contend (argue/insist) that _____. Obviously, both sides have over-simplified this issue. Actually, its value to people and society depends on how it is used.
(problems&solutions) According to a(n) survey (/investigation/analysis/statistics/report) released (/conducted/made) by _____, there is a growing (/increasing/declining) number of _____ who (/which) _____.
To be specific, ______. (What amazes us most is that _____.) Among countless factors which directly and indirectly influence _____, there are several conspicuous aspects as follows.
正文段：
(opinion) (agree/disagree) The main reason for my propensity to _____ is that _____. What is more, _____. Moving on to wider themes, I agree with the statement that _____ without reservations for the reason that _____. Naturally, _____. It can be given a concrete example that _____.
Another equally essential factor why I advocate _____ involves the realm of _____. No one can deny that _____. Obviously, it is imperative that _____. Meanwhile, a recent survey (/a typical example) will make this point clear and acceptable; _____.
However, we should concede that dispite the merits of _____ mentioned above, overextented _____ will be indeed counterproductive, even harmful. The harm it produces is, in my opinion, both palpable and profound. For individuals, it has a debasing impact on _____; for society, it may promote a negative tendency toward _____.
(advantages/disadvantages) (discuss both views) On one hand,
1. _____ has brought a number of (/ a lot of) benefits to us (/people).
2. _____ benefits us in many respects.
3.The benefits of _____ can be perceived in many aspects.
4.We get a lot of benefits from _____.
5. _____ has brought about many changes in people’s life.
6. _____ is a beneficial activity, in which we can obtain many advantages. First and foremost, _____. What is more, _____. In the end, _____.
On the other hand,
1.Just as a coin has tow sides, _____ also has some bad effects (/ill effects/side effects).
2._____, on the other hand, have its disadvantages (/negative points/problems).
3. However, _____ has also brought about (/given rise to/led to/resulted in/caused/created) a lot of problems.
4.Good (/Superior/Wonderful) as A is, _____, it has its own disadvantages (/brings its own problems), too.
For one thing, _____. For another, _____, Finally, _____.
(problems&solutions)
The reasons (/causes/factors) for _____ are complex (/varied/profound). Some attribute it to _____. Others put it down to _____. Still others owe it to _____. In my opinion, however, three (/some) factors shout louder than others (/weigh heavier than others/stand out from others). The most critical
reason lies in _____. Moreover, _____. Another important factor should not be ignored. _____.
Among a myriad of suggested solutions to _____ (/measures against _____ /plans for _____ /moves toward _____ /ideas on _____), three have begun to stand (/stick) out. First of all, _____. An equally effective measure (/solution/recipe) is _____. Last but not least, _____.
结论：
(opinion) (agree/disagree) Weighing the pros and cons of _____, I strongly commit to the notion that _____, not only because _____, but also because _____.
(advantages/disadvantages) To sum up,the key point is how to make good use of its positive aspects and avoid its negative points. While taking advantage of _____, we must try to find ways to reduce its disadvantages, namely, _____, to a minimum.