第一篇:短文天空中考范文
2017中考朗读短文
初中英语听力口语自动化考试训练材料
第一部分
朗读短文
用正确的语音语调朗读下面的短文
1(新)
Everybody thinks I have a real gift for painting. However, I once did not like art lessons because I could not draw very well. One day, I was playing with some paint as usual in Ms Lou’s art lesson. I mixed the paint with water. As I took the brush away, I dropped some paint onto the paper. Looking at the mark, I decided to blow it. The paint began to run, so I blew harder. The paint ran in all directions and made a very interesting picture! “That’s a very good picture, Sandy.” Ms Luo encouraged me to keep trying. Since then, I have been crazy about crayons and paints.
2(新)
Winter is my favourite season. It is very cold and everyone has to wear thick warm clothes, but I always enjoy the winter here in Harbin.
The temperature is usually below zero and it is often snowy. Everything is covered in deep white snow, and the lakes and rivers are frozen.
During this season, you cannot see beautiful flowers or green trees, but the land is quiet and beautiful.
My friends and I love playing outside in winter. It is exciting to have big snowball fights. We also make snowmen and use carrots for their noses. They look funny.
Winter is great!
3(新)
My farther has worked in a local factory for years. You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.
My father has always been kind and helpful. He has donated blood many times since 1990. The blood he has donated is enough to save over 70 lives. He has also donated blood cells to people with blood cancer. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.
When I was a little girl, I could not understand why my father always seemed to be kinder to others than to his own family. Now I realize that he has a heart full of love.
Zhalong Nature Reserve is in North-east China. It is one of the world’s most important wetlands. The area provides food and cover for a lot of wildlife. It is a perfect place for some rare birds.
Some people want to make the wetlands smaller in order to have more space for farms and buildings. This will lead to less and less space for wildlife. Now the Chinese government has made laws to protect Zhalong.
Wetlands are important because they provide food and shelter for wildlife including some endangered birds, and they also help prevent floods. We must protect the home of plants, fish and birds in Zhalong.
5(16年29)
Twenty years ago, mobile phones were rather expensive. Only important or rich people had them. However, these days more people have them in their hands, even high school students.
It is true that mobile phones can be very useful. They are an easy way to keep in touch with friends and family members anywhere and at any time. But we also hear mobile phones ring in places like classrooms, cinemas and museums. The sound is very loud and can disturb people. Some drivers have accidents because they use their mobile phones while driving. So, are mobile phones really a good thing?
6(16年2)
Dear Millie, Thank you very much for your letter. I hope I can offer you some useful advice. You said you often stay up late to finish all your homework. Plan your day carefully. Make a list of all the homework you have. Then work out how much time you need to finish it all. This will give you an idea of how much spare time you have. You also said that you do not have enough time for your hobbies. What about choosing your hobby according to the time you have? I hope you think my advice is worth taking. Best wishes, Helen
7(16年13)
Today, we are going to make potato stamps. Potato stamps are very easy to make. First, you should get a large potato. Don’t use a small one, as it’ll be too difficult to hold. Next, wash it. You want to be sure to get it really clean. Now cut it in half with a knife. Be careful! I don’t want anyone to get hurt. Next, you should draw a design on the end of the potato with a pen. Then carefully cut the design out with the tip of your knife. When you’re done, pour some paint onto the plate. Now put the cut end of your potato into the paint. Finally, put the potato onto a piece of paper. Wasn’t that fun?
8(16年12)
We are going to hold a talk on good table manners this afternoon. The purpose is to teach students rules for eating.
There will be a lot of advice on table manners. Above all, when you are sitting at the table, you should not start eating until everyone is ready, and it is impolite to make too much noise while you are eating or drinking. You should not eat with your mouth open or talk with food in your mouth. Before you leave the table, wait for everyone to finish.
These rules are important because we should make sure that both guests and hosts are comfortable at the table.
New York, London, Paris and many other cities are exciting places to live. There are lots of interesting things to see and do.
But there are serious problems in big cities too. It is expensive to live there, and there are too many people. Every year many people move to the cities to find work, study at good schools and receive high-quality medical care. But sometimes these people can’t find work or good places to live. Also it is hard to keep big cities safe and clean.
So, before people move to a big city, they should think about these problems they might have to deal with there.
10(16年1)
Halloween is on October 31. People celebrate it in many ways. Children wear special costumes and masks at Halloween. Many children play a game called “trick or treat”. They knock on their neighbours’ doors and shout “trick or treat”. Their neighbours usually give them some candy as a “treat”. If the children do not get any candy, they can play a trick on their neighbours. Some people also make lanterns out of big orange pumpkins. They cut out the eyes, the nose and the sharp teeth. They put candles in them so the light shines through the eyes, the nose and the teeth.
Dinosaurs lived on the Earth a long time ago. We now know that the first dinosaurs appeared about 230 million years ago.
There were hundreds of different kinds of dinosaurs, but they didn’t live at the same time. Some dinosaurs were really small. One of the smallest dinosaurs was about one metre long and weighed about three kilograms. Others were really big. Some very large ones weighed over 100,000 kilograms and some were about 40 metres long.
Some dinosaurs ate plants and others ate meat, but they didn’t eat grass. All dinosaurs had four legs and lived on land.
12(16年8)
Our environment is changing for the worse, so it is time for us to go green. Here are some simple steps to take at home.
We can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth. In order to save power, we should turn off the lights when we leave a room.
Some other good habits can help reduce pollution too. We should not use plastic bags when shopping. Recycling is also a good way to help reduce pollution. We should separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled.
Follow these small steps, and you can make a big difference to the Earth!
13(增加了一个yours,要重新录音)
Dear Sir, I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.
Daniel is a clever boy. He learns things quickly. He always thinks carefully when he works. He plans everything well. Daniel is really kind. Last week, a five-year-old boy lost his way and was crying in the street. Daniel saw him and took him to the police station. He stayed with the boy and played with him for two hours before the boy’s parents came. All the members at the Helping Hands Club think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Sandy
14 Hello, everyone! I’ve got some great news for you today. Our school basketball team is in the final round of the basketball competition! The match will be on Sunday, the 7th of November, at South Hill School. Now, listen carefully to the plan for the day. At 9 a.m., we’ll meet at the school gate. We’ll arrive at South Hill School at 10 a.m. The match will start at 10:30 a.m. After the match finishes, there will be the presentation of the cup and medals. The bus will leave at 12 noon from South Hill School and bring you back to school. Please come and support our team.
15(16年16)
This year’s Beijing Music Awards will be covered live this Saturday. All the big pop stars will attend. Before the awards start, we will interview some of the most famous stars. Two thousand fans have voted online for their favourite songs, singers and music videos. The results will be announced during the programme and the host will ask questions for the viewers to answer. As you are watching the awards, write down your answers and send text messages to 1396. If you are lucky enough, you could win two free concert tickets.
16(16年23)
Everyone needs friends. There is an old saying, “Friends are God’s way of taking care of us.” But how do you find real friendship and keep it?
First, you should choose a friend. A good friend should be kind and helpful. For example, if you have a bad day, a good friend should listen to your complaints and do his or her best to help.
But friendships are not always perfect. Even best friends have fights. When you have a fight with your friend, try to talk to him or her. If he or she doesn’t want to talk, don’t be sad. You could write a letter instead.
We need to do something for giant pandas. They are now in danger. For example, giant pandas do not have many babies during their lives, and it’s easy for baby pandas to get sick and die when they are very young. Also, giant pandas mainly live on a special kind of bamboo, so the bamboo forests are very important to them. However, the bamboo forests are becoming smaller and smaller. As a result, giant pandas may not have a place to live or food to eat. There are now only about 1,600 pandas in the wild. We should take action to protect them right away.
18(16年22)
I love reading. I spend over seven hours a week reading different types of books. On weekdays, I usually read for about half an hour before going to bed. I read a lot at the weekend. I am interested in history books, but I like novels best. The four great classical Chinese novels are my favourite.
I get most of my books from Sunshine Library — it is just opposite my home. My friends give me lots of advice on books. We often meet together and discuss what to read.
Reading is always a wonderful time. Good books are good friends. They also open up a whole new world to me.
I have to choose a new colour for my bedroom. It’s a very important decision, because colour can change a person’s mood. I like orange, because it’s a happy, warm colour. It can make people feel comfortable. My best friend Jack doesn’t agree though. He thinks green is better. Jack says that green represents nature and that it can make you feel energetic. I remind Jack that green is also the colour of envy. My mother recommends blue. She thinks blue is a calm and peaceful colour, so it will make me less stressed and help me relax after school. Perhaps she is right.
20(16年6)
All around the world, people drink tea. But tea does not mean the same thing to everyone. In different countries people have very different ideas about drinking tea.
In China people like to have tea together with their friends. They drink tea at any time of the day. They put only tea leaves in their cups. They prefer tea with nothing in it.
Tea is also popular in Japan. People have tea every day. But the way they drink it is different from that in China.
In the USA people drink tea at breakfast or after meals. They usually use tea bags to make their tea.
21 Dear Sandy, I have just listened to a programme on the radio. It was about a new CD-ROM pack called “Daily English”. It is a new course from Australia. The pack includes a book and five CD-ROMs. It is very good for tourists and students. I’m sure we can learn a lot from it. We can learn about how to use the telephone and how to ask and answer questions. We can also learn to talk about the weather and the time. The course covers many topics, such as travel and hotels, food and drink, and shopping and money. I am going to order a pack online. Do you want me to order one for you too? Regards, Millie
22(16年18)
Yesterday we visited the Summer Palace and spent about three hours in it. The palace is a large Chinese garden set in a natural landscape and mainly includes a hill and a lake. The lake is very big — it takes up three quarters of the area. It was frozen, so we could not row a boat there. It was really a pity. Across the lake is a 17-hole bridge. There are over 50 stone lions on both sides of it. The lions are all different from each other. Isn’t it amazing? The Summer Palace was once a nice place for the emperors to spend the summer and it is well worth a visit.
23(16年15)
My neighbours are kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They have different skills and often help us with all kinds of problems.
Usually there is a “helping hands” meeting at the weekend. People go there when they need help with their problems. Computer engineers are popular. They help people check their computers. You can also find someone to fix things like broken bicycles. Students can get help with their homework. There are some college students among the volunteers, and they are always ready to help.
We are lucky to live in a neighbourhood like that. People here are like a big family.
24(16年24)
Kites have a long history in China. The Chinese began to make kites over 2,000 years ago. The first kite in history was made out of wood by Mozi. His student Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. In the Eastern Han dynasty, Cai Lun found a new way to make paper, and then people began to use paper to make kites. In the 13th century, an Italian man called Marco Polo visited China. He told people in the West all about kites. In the Ming and Qing dynasties, kite flying became a very popular outdoor activity. People liked to fly kites on sunny, windy days in spring.
25(16年3)
My ideal school starts at 8 a.m. and finishes at 3 p.m. I love sports and computers, so we have PE and computer lessons every day. The classes are quite small. There are about 20 students in each class.
There is a big dining hall. There we can eat and chat with our friends. There is a park on one side of our school and a shopping mall on the other. We have a big library. We also have a tennis court and a swimming pool.
There are lots of clubs and after-school activities. Every month, we go on a school trip to a museum or a theatre.
26
Yao Ming was born in Shanghai in 1980. He got his first basketball when he was only four years old, but he did not become serious about basketball until he was 12. Yao joined the Houston Rockets in 2002 and became the best Chinese player to have ever played in the NBA.
When Yao Ming lived in the USA, he returned to China whenever he was needed. He took part in the Olympics in 2004 and in 2008 as one of the Chinese athletes. Since he ended his basketball career, Yao has done a lot of charity work, especially for poor Chinese teenagers.
27
UNICEF was set up in 1946 to help children after the war in Europe. Now, UNICEF helps children all over the world. It works in 158 countries. It helps governments and families make the world a better place for children.
UNICEF gets its money from donations. It raises money by selling Christmas cards and organizing other fund-raising activities. People can help UNICEF by doing voluntary work.
UNICEF believes that all children should have clean water and food so that they can be healthy. It also believes that they should go to school instead of working to support their families.
28
My name is Lucy. I am in Year 9 at Woodland School near London. It is a mixed school. Boys and girls have lessons together. My favourite subject is French. Learning foreign languages is fun.
Our school has a Reading Week every year. During the week, we can borrow more books from the school library. We can also bring in books and magazines from home. I often read more books than my classmates. Near the end of the week, we discuss the books with our classmates in class. Time seems to go faster when we are reading interesting books.
29(16年5)
Dear classmates, Have you ever had any problems? Are you wondering who you can ask for advice? If so, you can write to Mr Sigmund Friend. You may wonder who he is. He is a youth worker. Do you know what a youth worker does? Mr Friend says that youth workers help young people solve their problems. They are doing a great job. Some of my friends wrote to Mr Friend and asked how they could deal with their problems. Soon they got his replies. Now they know what they should do. Best wishes, Millie
30
In the Chinese lunar calendar, there are 12 animal signs. Each of them represents a lunar year.
It is said that the animals held an exciting race to decide their order. After the race began, the strong, hard-working Ox took the lead. Suddenly, the clever Rat jumped on the Ox’s back and won the race! The Ox came second, the Tiger third, and so it went. The Pig took his time and came last.
The cycle of animal years repeats every 12 years. Some people believe that people born in the same animal year may share similar characteristics. For example, they believe people born in the Year of the Dragon are powerful and energetic.
第二篇:广州市中考满分作文-怀想天空
怀想天空
中央电视台一号演艺大厅一期节目开始录制„„
崔永元(以下简称崔):各位观众朋友们,欢迎收看新一期的《实话实说》节目。今天,我为大家请来了我们的两位老朋友,白云女士和黑土先生,让我们热烈欢迎!
白云、黑土进场„„
崔:大叔大妈,欢迎你们再一次来到我们的节目做客!
白:小崔啊,你也甭客气了,俺们不都是老朋友了嘛!
黑:对啊小崔,我们还得感谢你呢,上次的节目一播完,我们可就火了,都上春晚了,还有人找我签名呢!
崔:那个大叔大妈,我们也都别客气了,开始今天的话题吧!今天我们的主题是“怀想天空”„„
白:天空有啥好说的,不就是蓝的嘛,还有鸟在飞。
黑:错!(拿出一个小本子,站起身)浩荡春风吹大地,天空黑了一大片,空气污染不得了,这得抓紧去治理。
崔:那个„„污染问题会有人治理的,我们今天谈的这个天空啊,不是那个天空„„白:要不是宇宙?
崔:也不是宇宙,是人们心中的天空,是人们遐思的天空„„
黑:那就是理想吧!
崔:差不多就是那意思,那么请大叔先说说吧!
黑:„„(沉默)
白:(看着黑土)还是我先说吧,那时候还是小姑娘的时候,没有什么多大的抱负,就想嫁个有钱人,可现在我知道这个想法错了。我这才发现,那时候的生活是多么枯燥,没有乐趣!大概是因为没有追求吧,我的天空也许被严重污染了„„好在后来有了黑土„„黑:(握着白云的手)那时候吧我是一个读书人,满怀着报答国家的雄心壮志,可是时势弄人啊!我被当成右倾分子批了,送去了乡下改造„„
崔:大叔大妈也就是那时候认识的吧?大叔您也别伤心,您和大妈现在不是过得挺好嘛!黑:那得全靠她啊!(眼中泛出光芒)那时候我就觉得我的天空一片灰暗,做任何事都失去了意义。后来都亏她陪我,并教导我„„
白:那时候我就觉得他挺有才的,却没有用武之地,人就像泄了气的皮球一样„„黑:自从听了她的话后,我就鼓起勇气,开始打拼,我觉得我的天空又放晴了!白:他的精神也影
响了我,是他把我天空的污染给治理了!
崔:大叔大妈的故事很感人,这也告诉我们,无论在什么时候,都要认真面对生活,我们的天空始终是蓝的,是“辽阔”的!不要放弃自己的梦想,天有多高,心就有多高!我们可以在自己的天空遨翔,在长天上写下“和谐”,写下“科学”!下面请大叔大妈用一句话总结一下吧!
白:娃娃们,要加油啊!为你们的早晨的天空增添色彩!
黑:呃„„这次来的火车票,也能给报吧!
崔:„„
掌声响起,节目结束„„
评点:此文写法独特,活泼而又沉着,搞笑而又厚实。考生具有良好的写作基本功,临场情绪又很自得,不妨如此这般地“潇洒”一回。
第三篇:中考满分作文——我的那一片天空
我的那一片天空
请以“我的那一片天空”为题写一篇600字以上的文章,除诗歌外,
文体不限。 解题策略
题目内涵很宽广,要想写得精彩,构思时要打破思维定势,发散思维。此题的限制语是“我的”,中心词是“天空”。怎样理解“天空”呢?它的内涵大致包括:宽广的宇宙,广大的空间;精神世界一定的处所,空间范围;生活圈子。题目的基本内涵可解释为:属于自己的小天地、小空间,个性化的爱好,独特的人生经历,思想和追求等。可写“我”的生活空间、学习空间、思想空间、交友空间等;抑或是父母的呵护、经史典籍的启悟、时尚生活气息的熏陶……
满分解密
2011滨州中考满分作文:我的那一片天空
我的那一片天
空 滨州考生
静静地望着窗外那片蔚蓝的天空,夏日的阳光热热地晒在我的身
上。
十六岁,本应是青春洋溢的花季,此时却只闪动着微弱的光芒。我感觉自己是只被暴风雨淋透的小鸟,筋疲力尽,疲惫不堪,渴望能够在
父母的呵护下自由飞翔。
中考即将来临,我却有一种想要放弃的冲动。
我的天空是自由的。
父母从来不在乎我的想法,不在意我的一举一动。洒满星光的夜晚,我告诉他们我想要出去一晚上,竟一个回应我的也没有!任我走出家门,任我在寒风肆虐的夜里瑟瑟发抖。难道这就是所谓的“自由”吗?其实,我不想要自由,我想要的只是一个回应。“爸爸,帮我看看这道数学题吧。”我向老爸求援。“我不会。你这么大了,自己的事情还理不清?自己做。”爸爸虎着脸,继续上他的网。我快速回到小屋,不愿意看爸爸天天玩电脑的疯狂。“妈妈,给我100块钱。”我隔着
窗喊。
妈妈看着电视,头也不回,扔过100块钱,也不问我要钱干什么。是缴资料费,上网,还是买零食?我懊恼地把钱夹在语文书里,关上窗子。我不愿意看妈妈天天沉溺在电视里的萎靡。
电脑,是爸爸的最爱。他除了赚钱,就是窝在家里打游戏聊天。电视,是妈妈的最爱。她除了上班、美容,就是躺在沙发上看没完没了的电
视剧。
没有爸爸妈妈探照灯似的视线在身上扫射,我是自由的。同学们羡慕我的自由,可是有谁知道,我需要的不是自由,是爸爸妈妈的关爱。 为了寻找爱,我开始叛逆,嚣张地向他们表示我的不满,还逼自己长出一身的刺,拼命向他们要钱,然后随意夹在书里或者买一堆零食送给同学。我大声跟他们发火,毫不讲理地胡搅蛮缠,来证明我的存在。可是,他们依然沉浸在自己的世界里,似乎连训我也不屑一顾。 渐渐地,我变得桀骜不驯,蛮横,颓废。但是,我的心在流血。
在冷漠的家里,我得到的只是我不想要的“自由”。
我累了,痛了。我不要自由的天空。我只要将那锋锐的刺收起来,轻轻地告诉父母“我爱你们”;我只要我青涩的十六岁,有父母的呵护与关爱;我只要我的天空里,有父母陪伴的痕迹。 再次静静地仰望天空,呼吸着窗外清新的空气,期待着有奇迹发生。
【阅卷心语】
1.不一样的天空,赋予本文强烈的现实意义。读着此文,心情异常沉重。正是需要呵护的年龄,却碰到了一对不负责任的父母。一个沉溺电脑,一个沉迷电视,将最需要关怀的孩子放在了一旁。家庭教育中,对孩子干涉过多不宜,但也不能不管不问,父母应该怎样把握这个度?这正是本文带给我们的深刻思索。
2.不一样的叙述,带给读者难忘的阅读体验。三个典型事例,冷静翔实的描述,凸显了父母的极端不负责。细腻的心理描写,流露出缺少关爱的孩子的孤独、无助。开头、结尾的环境描写,极好地烘托了“我”的内心期盼:渴望父母关爱。
走到茶几边,我认出了外婆的杯子,但是哪一个才是妈妈的杯子呢?突然之间,我觉得,自己真得太不了解父母了。当妈妈为我倒水时,我却不知她的杯子是什么样的;当妈妈为我夹我喜欢吃的菜时,我却没想过他们是爱吃淡一点,还是浓一点。。。。。。2009年到了,意味着过去一年的逝去和新的一年的到来。妈妈为我操劳了一整年,仔细想想,现在的我也应该为她做一点点事了。
于是,我决定先将茶沏好再找杯子。学着爸爸平时沏茶的顺序,我先从茶柜里找出了一罐普洱茶,再往烧水的壶里加入水放在电茶炉上烧,接着,我将爸爸已经掰好的普洱茶片拿了两片放在盖碗里,等了一会,水开了,我小心地将水注入盖碗,将盖盖上,把盖碗里第一遍的茶水滤掉,然后再次注水,盖上盖,焖一会才两手并用地将茶水倒入茶海里,因为第一次自己动手,盖碗的烫手是我所没想到的,手忙脚乱的我弄得茶几上一片片的水渍。重复几次这样的程序后,我先帮外婆倒了一杯茶,因为外婆特别喜欢喝茶。当外婆从厨房走出来的时候我已经把茶都给倒好了,这时,外婆才告诉我哪一个是妈妈的杯子。
妈妈起床了,我双手捧着水杯送到她的面前,就像捧着一颗温热的心。妈妈一愣,随即脸上露出了微笑,她一手接过水杯,伸出另一只手将我拉进了她的怀里,那手轻轻柔柔地在我的头上抚摸着,接着妈妈在我的脸上深深地亲了一口。虽然妈妈经常亲我,但这一刻的亲吻却最让我感到幸福。我抬起头对妈妈说:“妈妈快喝吧,要不茶要凉了。”妈妈仰起了脖子,张着嘴巴,“咕咚,咕咚”地喝了几大口。看她那甜蜜蜜的样子,仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。
我记得在我小学的时侯,就读过一首曹值的七步诗:“煮豆持作梗,辘毂以为汁;秸在釜下燃,豆在釜中泣;本是同根生,相煎何太急”。那时只知其大意,只知道曹操的长子曹丕继位,他在一些奸臣的影响下,担心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位,便逼迫曹值在七步之内作出一首诗来,否则处死;结果他的弟弟就在七步之内写出了流传至今的“七步诗”。当时这首诗对曹丕也是一种极大的潮讽。
几个世纪过去了,社会和生活都发生了极大的变化;应该说人的素质也应有所提高;一个人生活在世上,是离不开亲情、友情和爱情的;有人说:打架亲兄弟,上阵父子兵,但是,兄弟姐妹的团结并不是真对与他人打架斗殴,在生活上,事业上应是不可或缺的照应;俗话说“一根筷子容易断,十双筷子断就难”;可见,团结是一种力量,只有团结才有攻不破的堡垒。
然而,就在生活优越的今天,兄弟姐妹往往因为一点小事,一点利益而你争我斗,反目成仇,甚而相残;我和我的朋友在聊天时有时聊及这个问题,有人这样评论:一个人生活在世上,如果不顾亲情,对兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顾,那他在这个社会上和任何人都不要谈“情”字,特别是友情。
树大分枝,各自成立家庭后,在生活中一些小事是难免发生的,但要看你怎样去对待,把金钱和利益看的太重,那麽,你就会值亲情于不顾;看淡名利,注重亲情才是做人的底线;争则不足,让则有余,在利益和金钱面前,我们何不礼让一点,做一个有道德、有素质、有亲情的人呢?
家和万事兴,团结是一种力量,让我们团结友爱,和睦共处,为个人的事业、为家庭的生活、为国家的兴盛而看重亲情、友情、爱情;把金钱和利益看淡一些吧! 人过留名,雁去留声,希望在几十年之后,当你离开这个世界的时侯,留给后人的不是唾泣,而是美愉。
今天是她父亲的生日,她要回家和父亲一起过生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父亲已经六十多岁了,为了子女的成长与幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.话说过来,人一辈子真的很不容易.人年老时非常希望能够和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一个电话甚至一个短信,父母也已经很知足了.我由于长期在外,很想念爸爸妈妈.想起过去,心里真的很辛酸,父母亲为了我们的成长真的付出了很多,然而他们现在又生活得怎么样呢?想起过去的一幕一幕,我心里很难受!我很希望做做子女的我们,踏踏实实地做好每一件事情,不让父母担忧,这是最基本的我们应当做的事情. 谈到这里我不由自主地想起一部电影《我的兄弟姐妹》,这是一部关于亲情的影片,暂且不管故事的真实性,主要考究它的内涵. 主人公齐思甜和哥哥齐忆苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齐天生活在一个不富裕却充满温馨和爱的家。然而在一个暴风雪的夜晚,他们的母亲旧病复发,咳得吐血了。父亲背她去医院,却出了意外,他们俩都亡故了。次日,另一家人搬进了四个孩子的家。性格刚强的哥哥无法忍受这个新家庭的种种,无奈地带着弟弟妹妹离开了家。他们开始四处奔波,寻找落脚之处。当实在没有能力照顾弟弟妹妹的时候,他把妹妹齐思甜送给一对正要出国的夫妇;把弟弟送给他的舅妈一家;又把小妹妹带到一对老人家中请他们收养。他自己和弟弟妹妹们便各奔东西……20年后,齐忆苦在北京当上了出租车司机;齐思甜出国受到良好的教育,成了音乐家;齐天成为东北大学学生;齐妙却当上了舞厅小姐。在北京的音乐会上,思甜蓦然回首的瞬间,音乐霎时凝固了。他们四人拥抱在一起,泪水顺着另一支悠扬的乐曲落下,听众的掌声久久不息……终于,他们有了一次永久的重逢。
齐思甜的父亲是一个音乐教师,他们一家人都生活在音乐的天堂里,这也为后来思甜成为音乐家打好了基础。父亲说:“人生路上有许多困难的事情,只要有音乐在,你的灵魂便不再寂寞。”这位父亲是伟大的,他乐观开朗,以身作则。尽管他和蔼可亲,但同时又是一个严厉的父亲。有一回,齐忆苦偷邻居家的鸡蛋,是为了满足妹妹小小的心愿。而他却因此挨了父亲的鞭子,还罚他站在雪地里很久。在父亲被分配到别的地方边劳动边教音乐时,他对这“莫须有的罪名”并没有悲愤倒下,而是瞒着家人当搬运工挨家挨户送木材,还干各种各样的粗活。他也没有一丝怨言,还对孩子说:“我没事。”懂事的孩子们也拿起了工具,帮父亲干活。他哼着小调,阳光幸福地洒在他们脸上。
可见,这位父亲是多么伟大,他以他的行动告诉了孩子们音乐的重要性及如何面对生活的苦难。
那么,又是一种什么样的力量,使后来的四个孩子重逢,使他们欢聚,使他们接受心灵的洗礼?
毋庸置疑,是亲情。
寒冷的冬天,四个孩子依偎在车站。他们在为下一餐饭而担心着。“哥,我饿。”、“哥,我冷。”、“哥,我想回家……”弟妹们的话刺痛了哥哥。他说:“只要我还有一口气,就不让你们受委屈。”事实上他也这么做了。如果不是亲情,他又何必活得如此累呢?他又怎能忘记,那一晚,父母临走时对他的嘱咐:“你是哥哥,要照顾好弟弟妹妹。”
生活改变了许多人和事,也改变了他们。但是,亲情是始终不渝的。 最小的妹妹齐妙长大后竟成了舞厅小姐!她离开原来的家后,养父母去世得早,加上无人看管,就开始堕落下去了。她在20年后与齐思甜相遇时,大言不惭地对她说她满足于当前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后,她回忆起以前的一点一滴,又不免伤感和懊悔。她发现自己对不起所有爱她的人,她的良心受到了谴责。于是,亲情的归来使她的精神方面的巨人复活了!她的灵魂才得以解放。
亲情给人以新生,亲情又犹如一支镇心剂。
亲情是心中的太阳,照耀着我们;亲情是温柔的春风,抚摸着我们;亲情如绵绵的春雨,滋润着我们。
亲情是雪,晶莹剔透;亲情也可以是雷,惊天撼地。
亲情可以是灯,温暖柔和;亲情也可以是微弱的烛光,不亮却很辉煌。 不管怎么说,亲情一定是无价的宝藏。
没有了亲情,世界变得荒芜、凄凉;没有了亲情,生命则无法繁衍后代;没有了亲情,生活就单调枯燥;没有了亲情,人间也成了地狱。
亲情是沟通两代之间思想交流的桥梁,是一条连结两颗心的纽带。 “兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花,谁也不认得谁。但落在地下后,结成一体,结成冰,化成水,就永远也分不开了。”
“临行密密封,意恐迟迟归”,是亲情。 “我在这头,母亲在那头”,也是亲情。
无价的亲情呵,愿我们在你的鼓舞下,驶向美好灿烂的明天。关于亲情的影片..我看这部影片时,心情很沉重,流泪了. 我想,不论一个人的出身是多么卑微,只要我们能够记住亲情的鼓舞与期待,只要我们我们去刻苦努力,只要我们在心理上能够战胜自己,那么我们就是生活的强者!
第四篇:中考满分作文——我的那一片天空
我的那一片天空原题回放
请以“我的那一片天空”为题写一篇600字以上的文章,除诗歌外,文体不限。
解题策略
题目内涵很宽广,要想写得精彩,构思时要打破思维定势,发散思维。此题的限制语是“我的”,中心词是“天空”。怎样理解“天空”呢?它的内涵大致包括:宽广的宇宙,广大的空间;精神世界一定的处所,空间范围;生活圈子。题目的基本内涵可解释为:属于自己的小天地、小空间,个性化的爱好,独特的人生经历,思想和追求等。可写“我”的生活空间、学习空间、思想空间、交友空间等;抑或是父母的呵护、
经史典籍的启悟、时尚生活气息的熏陶„„
满分解密
2011滨州中考满分作文:我的那一片天空
我的那一片天空
滨州考生
静静地望着窗外那片蔚蓝的天空,夏日的阳光热热地晒在我的身
上。
十六岁,本应是青春洋溢的花季,此时却只闪动着微弱的光芒。我感觉自己是只被暴风雨淋透的小鸟,筋疲力尽,疲惫不堪,渴望能够在父母
的呵护下自由飞翔。
中考即将来临,我却有一种想要放弃的冲动。
我的天空是自由的。
父母从来不在乎我的想法,不在意我的一举一动。洒满星光的夜晚,我告诉他们我想要出去一晚上,竟一个回应我的也没有!任我走出家门,任我在寒风肆虐的夜里瑟瑟发抖。难道这就是所谓的“自由”吗?其实,我不想要自由,我想要的只是一个回应。“爸爸,帮我看看这道数学题吧。”我向老爸求援。“我不会。你这么大了,自己的事情还理不清?自己做。”爸爸虎着脸,继续上他的网。我快速回到小屋,不愿意看爸
爸天天玩电脑的疯狂。“妈妈,给我100块钱。”我隔着窗喊。 妈妈看着电视,头也不回,扔过100块钱,也不问我要钱干什么。是缴资料费,上网,还是买零食?我懊恼地把钱夹在语文书里,关上窗子。
我不愿意看妈妈天天沉溺在电视里的萎靡。
电脑,是爸爸的最爱。他除了赚钱,就是窝在家里打游戏聊天。电视,是妈妈的最爱。她除了上班、美容,就是躺在沙发上看没完没了的电视
剧。
没有爸爸妈妈探照灯似的视线在身上扫射,我是自由的。同学们羡慕我的自由,可是有谁知道,我需要的不是自由,是爸爸妈妈的关爱。 为了寻找爱,我开始叛逆,嚣张地向他们表示我的不满,还逼自己长出一身的刺,拼命向他们要钱,然后随意夹在书里或者买一堆零食送给同学。我大声跟他们发火,毫不讲理地胡搅蛮缠,来证明我的存在。可是,
他们依然沉浸在自己的世界里,似乎连训我也不屑一顾。
渐渐地,我变得桀骜不驯,蛮横,颓废。但是,我的心在流血。
在冷漠的家里,我得到的只是我不想要的“自由”。
我累了,痛了。我不要自由的天空。我只要将那锋锐的刺收起来,轻轻地告诉父母“我爱你们”;我只要我青涩的十六岁,有父母的呵护与关
爱;我只要我的天空里,有父母陪伴的痕迹。
再次静静地仰望天空,呼吸着窗外清新的空气,期待着有奇迹发生。
【阅卷心语】
1.不一样的天空,赋予本文强烈的现实意义。读着此文,心情异常沉重。正是需要呵护的年龄,却碰到了一对不负责任的父母。一个沉溺电
脑,一个沉迷电视,将最需要关怀的孩子放在了一旁。家庭教育中,对孩子干涉过多不宜,但也不能不管不问,父母应该怎样把握这个度?这
正是本文带给我们的深刻思索。
2.不一样的叙述,带给读者难忘的阅读体验。三个典型事例,冷静翔实的描述,凸显了父母的极端不负责。细腻的心理描写,流露出缺少关爱的孩子的孤独、无助。开头、结尾的环境描写,极好地烘托了“我”
的内心期盼:渴望父母关爱。
第五篇:中考满分作文600字:我的天空很平常
河水静静的流淌,静静地……
门前月季拚命绽放着,似乎要把花蕾绽破似的。
门内院中种着花草,长得圆圆实实,院子打扫得干干净净。
这就是我的家,平凡而又恬静。
家是这样,我的爸爸妈妈也是这样,平凡而又老实。
爸爸妈妈是我生命生命旅程上的向导。
当别的同学为父母禁止看电视而苦恼时,我却一点也不担心,因为我的爸爸妈妈理解我体贴我,他们从来不阻止我看电视,因为他们知道我不会玩物丧志。
相反,他们还会鼓励我看电视。爸爸妈妈都喜欢主持人王小丫。王小丫主持的节目丰富多彩、生动有趣,节目中提问的问题对我的学习很有帮助。于是每期节目,爸爸妈妈都陪我看,还让我记下一些有益于我学习的题目;有时,我不在家爸妈还会帮我记下题目,待我回家,他们来考我。这就丰富了我的历史、地理等到方面的知识。一切都是那么有意义。
即将中考时,许多家长都来学校问班主任关于自己孩子的学习情况,因为我了解父母,他们是不会来的,他们工作忙。
可是有一天我改变了看法,在无意中,我看见远处班主任正和我熟悉的两个身影在交谈,我认出了那是我的爸爸妈妈……
一切都是那么无私。
爸爸妈妈是我生命旅程上的向导,他们为我创造出一片蔚蓝的天空,任我自在飞翔。